Description [is] one technique write to use the detail with an eye to make the reader seakan-akan at one's post occurence, follow to feel, experiencing of, see and hear to hit one event or scene. Writing description can make the character depicted [by] more live its picture [in] reader marrow
Follow the example of the descriptive article: article cutting entitle " Help To Feel pity for the Us …" ( Compass, 23 July 1991)
Help to Feel pity for Us
If only green turtle ( Chelonia Mydas) and turtle sisik ( Eretmochelys Imbricata) can speak possible said [by] [is] this article title sentence. Unhappily, voice even also that turtle unable to. We [do] not know what feeling of moment of knife of neck sentence and its stomach.
[In] Road;Street Sidakarya, area of Devil Denpasar, more than 20 green turtle tail [of] tergeletak [in] page;yard, cannot make a move because its foreleg [is] trussed. Only head make a move or its eye [is] slit. Carapace which at first [is] always incured [by] a water go out to sea to look to run dry. Sometime that turtle [is] berhari-hari dryness wait to come the doom nya [in] knifepoint.
That evening, one of among other things have been upended the above slaughtering house pallet. There [is] desih lirih which is inaudible on the verge of. Foot/Feet [of] behind turtle which [is] not bound [by] meronta-ronta and its eye [is] berkedip-kedip [of] when its neck [is] sliced [by] a knife. Fresh blood immediately dropp to relocation pail. Longer rapid to blood progressively emit a stream of because ever greater slice hurt [of] menganga. Blood start to desist to emit a stream of the neck moment almost break.
[In] Foreland Benoa, Bali, slaughtering house place other turtle [in] Bali Island, turtle butchered [by] more sadis. Turtle in a state of life [of] when Sanusi, 52, slicing soft extension [of] carapace [of] under and carapace for. voice anything from the turtle. What [is] heard only sound of soft husk sentence blade. Turtle [of] equal to almost that one metre try the meronta although that of course without effect. Its foreleg have been bound to [by] grow into one. Only foot/feet [of] behind and its head [is] which can oscillate.
Later;Then forcedly, carapace [of] under nya dibetot get out of its body. Look the interior content torn smear the blood. Torture not yet ended to this end. Flesh moment and its innards;bowels [is] taken even also look the head, foot/feet and its tail still oscillate the painfulness, to the last nya he/she really die …
Principal
There [is] three principle in writing descriptive - In writing description there [is] one clear dominant impression ( clear dominant impressive). For example if we wish to explain to hit a dog, important [is] we chosen and inform the reader [of] whether/what that dog menace or tame animal please. We have to chosen one that dominant impression, cannot both. this Dominant impression will guide we chosen the detail and when compiled in sentence will become clear for reader - writing Deskrispi can be objective or subyektif, giving writer of word choice, word colour, and atmosphere which is wide enough. For example, objective description a turtle will mention the high fact, heavy, colour, and other. Description Subyektif remain to require the detail of that objective but also emphasize the writer feeling to that turtle, as well as habit and personalitinya, like turtle cannot voice, always reside in the water ( sea), cannot melawan [of] when [in] continent, painfulness condition - Intention of writing description [is] entangle the reader so that he can conceive our something that [is] descriptionkan. Important to in consequence use the specific detail and konkret.
Order
- Writing Description base on the detail konkret [of] the capturer by pentameter indra. Remember to we own five pentameter indra
- Writer have to beware of to chosen the detail to support the selected especial impression. Or equally, writer own the authority to remove the detail which is disagree with especial impression
- Description very often base on the emotion which wish shown. In consequence vb., vb. adverb, and adjective more able to be used to show the emotion compared to [by] noun.
- Except objective description, we confidence have to be especial impressive that selected [by] make the reader trust ( a[n condition bounce which komplek [of] concerning confidence, feel the, value, and emotion)
Strategy
- First try to submit all detail; later;then develop;builded especial impression by detail this
- Ascertaining Your detail [is] consistent impressively [is] especial. To facilitate to note five pentameter indra in paper sheet, what censored
- Try to bring the reader [of] pursuant to chronological sequence [of] space and time. For example, explaining medley of cart transportation;journey from one place to other;dissimilar place or explain the river stream from wellspring to domestic
- Use the approach dulu-sekarang-nanti to show the process of change or repair. For example forest circumstance [of] before cut away, circumstance now
- Select;Choose the emotion and try the descriptionkan. Possible more difficult to start [it] but will mean when ready made. Improving ability write the description, keen [of] indera [of] A lot of writer frustasi [of] because story which they write to just level off and [there] no life element. Why? Story [do] not in and graceless because reader [do] not get the clear situation that picture. Only [through/ passing] writing of description writer can transfer the picture [of] situation that live ( for example because generating emotion) and clear.
To be able to write the description better, the five senses ( eyesight, hearing, penciuman, stamping, groping) writer become important. How writer can sharply its the five senses?
Practice
- Eyesight: See one obyek / object [of] [in front/ahead] of You this time. Forget the adjective and try the mendescriptionkan obyek / that object. If that object [is] cake rasher, for example, don't write the " delicious cake rasher" ( [is] adjective), but descriptionkan " form the kuenya, colour kuenya, size measure kuenya, whereabout cake placed." Try to throw away as many as possible adjective in breakdown of You, and use the noun to depict that obyek. Follow the example of other;dissimilar: don't write down the " beautiful flower" but showing what making that flower respect the
- Hearing: When You wish the mendescriptionkan one scene, for example whoop it up class column, select;choose the words which sunguh can catch that situation by peeping out heard voices
- Penciuman: Impressive from very on file indera penciuman old in marrow [of] than eyesight or voice. Impressive [of] bau-bauan kept [in] association brain with the people, object, and atmosphere [of] when that bau-bauan [is] kissed. [In] on file everybody brain various experience [of] [through/ passing] indera penciuman which association with the place or event with the somebody which different each other.
This experience [is] very typical. Try to make the list bau-bauan and its association. For example, when smell the soto betawi remind the You [of] [at] Your old fellow house atmosphere. Like also when trying barbed mendescriptionkan by what You see the, related/relevant mendescriptionkan by indera [is] difficult penciuman because in fact You is ( [in] brain) know like what bau-bauan which wish the You descriptionkan [of] but difficult explain [it].
Some people own the same experience concerning certain bau-bauan, for example most people know the jasmine aroma. When You tell a story to hit the divorce, " Nina stepp its foot/feet to flowery garden. Jasmine fragrance make [it] become sorrowful. Jasmine fragrance remind [it] [at] its husband [is] which still love of. Reminding of it on happy when he and husband sit side by side [in] decorative weding-bed
- Pengecap: Way of easiest [of] mendescriptionkan feel the ecap [is] with taste the obyek to didescriptionkan. Practice: try to feel the cake, later;then descriptionkan
- Groping: Hand of Memilki indera peraba giving impression tekstur [in] brain. Practice: try the descriptionkan tennis ball
Follow the example of the descriptive article: article cutting entitle " Help To Feel pity for the Us …" ( Compass, 23 July 1991)
Help to Feel pity for Us
If only green turtle ( Chelonia Mydas) and turtle sisik ( Eretmochelys Imbricata) can speak possible said [by] [is] this article title sentence. Unhappily, voice even also that turtle unable to. We [do] not know what feeling of moment of knife of neck sentence and its stomach.
[In] Road;Street Sidakarya, area of Devil Denpasar, more than 20 green turtle tail [of] tergeletak [in] page;yard, cannot make a move because its foreleg [is] trussed. Only head make a move or its eye [is] slit. Carapace which at first [is] always incured [by] a water go out to sea to look to run dry. Sometime that turtle [is] berhari-hari dryness wait to come the doom nya [in] knifepoint.
That evening, one of among other things have been upended the above slaughtering house pallet. There [is] desih lirih which is inaudible on the verge of. Foot/Feet [of] behind turtle which [is] not bound [by] meronta-ronta and its eye [is] berkedip-kedip [of] when its neck [is] sliced [by] a knife. Fresh blood immediately dropp to relocation pail. Longer rapid to blood progressively emit a stream of because ever greater slice hurt [of] menganga. Blood start to desist to emit a stream of the neck moment almost break.
[In] Foreland Benoa, Bali, slaughtering house place other turtle [in] Bali Island, turtle butchered [by] more sadis. Turtle in a state of life [of] when Sanusi, 52, slicing soft extension [of] carapace [of] under and carapace for. voice anything from the turtle. What [is] heard only sound of soft husk sentence blade. Turtle [of] equal to almost that one metre try the meronta although that of course without effect. Its foreleg have been bound to [by] grow into one. Only foot/feet [of] behind and its head [is] which can oscillate.
Later;Then forcedly, carapace [of] under nya dibetot get out of its body. Look the interior content torn smear the blood. Torture not yet ended to this end. Flesh moment and its innards;bowels [is] taken even also look the head, foot/feet and its tail still oscillate the painfulness, to the last nya he/she really die …
Principal
There [is] three principle in writing descriptive - In writing description there [is] one clear dominant impression ( clear dominant impressive). For example if we wish to explain to hit a dog, important [is] we chosen and inform the reader [of] whether/what that dog menace or tame animal please. We have to chosen one that dominant impression, cannot both. this Dominant impression will guide we chosen the detail and when compiled in sentence will become clear for reader - writing Deskrispi can be objective or subyektif, giving writer of word choice, word colour, and atmosphere which is wide enough. For example, objective description a turtle will mention the high fact, heavy, colour, and other. Description Subyektif remain to require the detail of that objective but also emphasize the writer feeling to that turtle, as well as habit and personalitinya, like turtle cannot voice, always reside in the water ( sea), cannot melawan [of] when [in] continent, painfulness condition - Intention of writing description [is] entangle the reader so that he can conceive our something that [is] descriptionkan. Important to in consequence use the specific detail and konkret.
Order
- Writing Description base on the detail konkret [of] the capturer by pentameter indra. Remember to we own five pentameter indra
- Writer have to beware of to chosen the detail to support the selected especial impression. Or equally, writer own the authority to remove the detail which is disagree with especial impression
- Description very often base on the emotion which wish shown. In consequence vb., vb. adverb, and adjective more able to be used to show the emotion compared to [by] noun.
- Except objective description, we confidence have to be especial impressive that selected [by] make the reader trust ( a[n condition bounce which komplek [of] concerning confidence, feel the, value, and emotion)
Strategy
- First try to submit all detail; later;then develop;builded especial impression by detail this
- Ascertaining Your detail [is] consistent impressively [is] especial. To facilitate to note five pentameter indra in paper sheet, what censored
- Try to bring the reader [of] pursuant to chronological sequence [of] space and time. For example, explaining medley of cart transportation;journey from one place to other;dissimilar place or explain the river stream from wellspring to domestic
- Use the approach dulu-sekarang-nanti to show the process of change or repair. For example forest circumstance [of] before cut away, circumstance now
- Select;Choose the emotion and try the descriptionkan. Possible more difficult to start [it] but will mean when ready made. Improving ability write the description, keen [of] indera [of] A lot of writer frustasi [of] because story which they write to just level off and [there] no life element. Why? Story [do] not in and graceless because reader [do] not get the clear situation that picture. Only [through/ passing] writing of description writer can transfer the picture [of] situation that live ( for example because generating emotion) and clear.
To be able to write the description better, the five senses ( eyesight, hearing, penciuman, stamping, groping) writer become important. How writer can sharply its the five senses?
Practice
- Eyesight: See one obyek / object [of] [in front/ahead] of You this time. Forget the adjective and try the mendescriptionkan obyek / that object. If that object [is] cake rasher, for example, don't write the " delicious cake rasher" ( [is] adjective), but descriptionkan " form the kuenya, colour kuenya, size measure kuenya, whereabout cake placed." Try to throw away as many as possible adjective in breakdown of You, and use the noun to depict that obyek. Follow the example of other;dissimilar: don't write down the " beautiful flower" but showing what making that flower respect the
- Hearing: When You wish the mendescriptionkan one scene, for example whoop it up class column, select;choose the words which sunguh can catch that situation by peeping out heard voices
- Penciuman: Impressive from very on file indera penciuman old in marrow [of] than eyesight or voice. Impressive [of] bau-bauan kept [in] association brain with the people, object, and atmosphere [of] when that bau-bauan [is] kissed. [In] on file everybody brain various experience [of] [through/ passing] indera penciuman which association with the place or event with the somebody which different each other.
This experience [is] very typical. Try to make the list bau-bauan and its association. For example, when smell the soto betawi remind the You [of] [at] Your old fellow house atmosphere. Like also when trying barbed mendescriptionkan by what You see the, related/relevant mendescriptionkan by indera [is] difficult penciuman because in fact You is ( [in] brain) know like what bau-bauan which wish the You descriptionkan [of] but difficult explain [it].
Some people own the same experience concerning certain bau-bauan, for example most people know the jasmine aroma. When You tell a story to hit the divorce, " Nina stepp its foot/feet to flowery garden. Jasmine fragrance make [it] become sorrowful. Jasmine fragrance remind [it] [at] its husband [is] which still love of. Reminding of it on happy when he and husband sit side by side [in] decorative weding-bed
- Pengecap: Way of easiest [of] mendescriptionkan feel the ecap [is] with taste the obyek to didescriptionkan. Practice: try to feel the cake, later;then descriptionkan
- Groping: Hand of Memilki indera peraba giving impression tekstur [in] brain. Practice: try the descriptionkan tennis ball
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